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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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A mistake you have made in all three of their faces, though Rhoswyn is the mildest of offenders, is the center of the lips isnt on the same axis as the nose. The center of the mouth is directly under the nose, it makes you character read like they have a mouth on their cheek. Youre getting much better with skin pigments, i like the red in the cheeks of Rhoswyn, however all your shadows on the skin read as the same color. You want more variety in your skin shadows. Another lighting concern that bothers me in you apply cast shadows very conservatively. You appear to have a fair strong single key light with a rim light. You strong key would bring in more cast shadows, especially on far side of their heads, you would see a much more pronounced cast shadow on their shoulders. Oh and this is just a nitpick but remus' neck would be far wider to accommodate his his gigantic shoulders. Watch out at the base of seph's skull, there should be more of an indent where his neck meets his skull.
I just realized why your faces appear so flat, youre missing core shadows. Putting in core shadows will really bring out your depth. Oh and one last minor thing, the bg texture is kinda distracting because its so rough and the characters are so smooth, just bring down the opacity a bit, problem solved.
I hope some of this helps, those are all the major things that are worth mentioning i believe